Day 15 Prompt; A Stranger Just Walked In On Me from Patti

A Stranger Just Walked In On Me

A stranger just walked in on me; opened the door as I sat down to pee.

The way she yipped, you’d think her thong was down to her knees.

“So sorry, so sorry,” she kept saying to me, I slid the latch and laughed with glee.

Later, in the bar, I saw her glancing at me; her cheeks were burnt as red as could be.

I slid down the pole, collected my fee, and wondered what the hell she thought she might see.


Patti Hall 2013, who has never channeled a stripper before!

About Patti Hall

Writer, daughter, sister, mom, niece, grani, and friend. Works-in-progress; 3 children's books, some poetry and a memoir series, "Souvenirs from My Heart." Pursuits of happiness include gardening, walking the beach, reading, writing, photography, traveling and genealogy. I am a widow (2009), lost my sis in 2012, my aunt and a precious grandson in 2013.

10 comments on “Day 15 Prompt; A Stranger Just Walked In On Me from Patti

  1. Maybe we should all channel a stripper at some point in our lives. 🙂

  2. Oh my goodness. Patti, did you take a laptop to a bar for this one? I certainly wasn’t offended, lol! I hope we meet up with her again dancing to today’s prompt.

  3. Oh I missed this, really good! And funny, lol.

  4. haha! tell me there is one person that this has not happened to.

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