Day 28 Prompt – Upon the Ship of Fools

Jules sat in the chair on the client side of the desk and tapped his fingers on the arm. He eyed the couch along the wall with the plethora of potted plants and wondered if he should lay down. The couch was still beckoning him with it’s plushness when the doctor walked in.

“Mr. Verne,” said the pleasant-faced middle-aged physician as he held out his hand, “I’m Dr. Robinson.”

“Pleased to meet you,” said Jules. He stood up to shake the doctor’s hand and glanced over toward the couch. “Should I?”

“Whatever makes you the most comfortable.”

Jules smiled and sat back down in the chair. “I’m afraid I might fall asleep.”

“Yes,” said Dr. Robinson. “I see from your file that you’ve been experiencing nightmares.”

Jules nodded. “That’s why I’m here. I’ve been dreaming that I was alone and shipwrecked, and ended up on a deserted island.”

The doctor smiled. “That’s funny.”

“I beg your pardon?”

“Well, your name…”

“Yes, what about it?”

Dr. Robinson opened his mouth, hesitated, and opened up the file on his desk, muttering, “Mysterious Island, or never mind,” Jules wasn’t sure which. When he glanced back at his patient, Jules was squinting at him.

“You were there…”

“I was where, exactly?”

“On the island.”

“But you said it was deserted.”

“It was. In my dream, I was you.”

“I find that highly unlikely.” Dr. Robinson’s face reddened, as though he was lying.

“You remember being there, don’t you?”

“I have no idea what you’re talking about sir.”

“You do! You most certainly do!”

Dr. Robinson stood, paused, grabbed the file and ran from the room. Jules chased him, only to watch the man jump overboard. He imagined the last thing Dr. Robinson saw before he drowned were the words “Ship of Fools” emblazoned on the side of the boat.

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15 comments on “Day 28 Prompt – Upon the Ship of Fools

  1. Reblogged this on Get on my plate! and commented:

    Day 28 Prompt – Story on a ship. Past, present, or future.

  2. I think this one tied up my brain in knots. I’d better get back to cleaning so I can sort it out, lol.

  3. Well! The story has succeeded in making me feel quite wonky! I’m almost ready to jump overboard into my balloon and journey to the centre of the earth in it…

  4. Twisty and turn-y. I like it! 🙂

  5. That was brilliantly clever, great 🙂

  6. Nice story. I loved the fact that the good doctor was as nutty as his patient. Both peyote abusers.

  7. Another fun one. I think John may be right!

  8. Really clever story. When is a dream a dream and when is it reality?

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