First Time: Anticipation (Rated-R?)

I’m taking up the erotica challenge made by Ionia and I’m going to do something different.  I’m going to tell a sex scene through poetry over the course of the week.  Each poem will be a different part of the act.  Hopefully this works out and people enjoy.  So, here is Part 1:

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They stare across the table
Candles lighting up their eyes
Orbs of wanting need
Knowing what will come

She licks her lips of wine
Barely masking her desire
A piercing gaze
Imagining the coming night

He smiles and reaches
Gently touching her arm
Enough to make a spark
That runs into his chest

A playful foot
Runs up his leg
Toes tickling his senses
As they near his lust-filled center

They’ve had enough
Dessert denied
Check paid with a weighty tip
They wish to start their night

About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.

49 comments on “First Time: Anticipation (Rated-R?)

  1. Yes, I’d say that’s a good start!

  2. Nope, not downhill, just a little more “foreplay”.

  3. Who is your instructor on this?

  4. Wooo Baby! That’s steaming up my screen. Keep at it I might have to go take a cold river swim.

  5. I hope you know what you’re getting yourself into with this one Charles – although I do like the way that you are approaching it. A novel idea! Good luck and I shall be glued to my screen. 🙂

  6. Oh, great start. Hope you can keep it going, lol 😉

  7. Will they make it all the way home do you think?

  8. Sexy. I like the playful foot running up his leg. My husband has a foot fetish. Feet, as a sensuous body organ don’t get enough attention.

  9. Charles! Are we going to get an X rated version of Windemere soon? Or a collection of adult rated poetry? Talk about a real “beast” of blatherhorn vale, huh? 😀 I like it.

  10. […] out Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, and Part 5.  Tomorrow will be the […]

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