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Angst and Longing Prompt

We just want to be together

Don’t they know we want to be together,
For more than ninety days,
Can’t they get it through their heads,
Forever and one day
 
No, you cannot stay,
You’ve got to go away,
Yes, you can come again,
In another ninety days
 
This is just insupportable,
To be separated like this,
When I just want to hold you,
Always in eternal bliss
 
To be at their total mercy,
Our future in their hands,
Don’t do it just as they say,
And you’ll end up getting banned
 
Still I will persist,
To fight until nothing’s left,
To find a way to stay with you,
Until my dying breath

About Julian Froment

I am 47 years old. I enjoy reading and writing. I graduated from the university of Kent with a BSc (Hons) in Physics, many more years ago than I care to think about.

30 comments on “Angst and Longing Prompt

  1. Nice poem. Sorry for the rules here. Best to you.

  2. That sucks. I hope you figure out a way. The rules seem to be made to screw people over more often than help.

  3. So true. Pout. Lovely job expressing frustration, angst and longing.

  4. 😦 This sounds dreadful….nice poem but dreadful 😦 I hope something can be worked out.
    Ellespeth

  5. My heart bleeds for you both. Pity that people who try to do things properly have to face so many hurdles and obstacles, yet so many roam freely who have not.

  6. I really liked this poem – I have no idea what your muse for this was but it was sad and lovely at the same time. 🙂

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