Editing Haiku: A Six Poem Series


First Run

I think this is fun
I get to fix my mistakes
And witness the whole


Second Run

Second times the charm
I will focus on the tale
Sanding the edges


Third Run

Starting to wear down
Even after a long break
I will not give up


Fourth Run

I suck at writing
None suck as much as I do
Though this part is good


Fifth Run

Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck
Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck
Fuck fuck fuck fuck FUCK


Sixth Run

I got some help now
The doctor said he would read
Once Lincoln is done

About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.

3 comments on “Editing Haiku: A Six Poem Series

  1. […] Editing Haiku: A Six Poem Series (neverendingstorydepository.wordpress.com) […]

  2. I think the fifth run’s my favourite, lol 😉

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